Brian Jenner is a UK-based speechwriter. This blog is a selection of his thoughts on the subject, reviews of the speaking performances of public figures and articles of general interest on the subject of rhetoric. If you need a speech, please get in contact.
In the fight between you and the world, back the world.
I found this quotation attributed to Frank Zappa and Franz Kafka on various internet sites. Frank Zappa is good value. I found some more quotations by him - click here.
I was asked to talk about Colonel Tim Collins' speech before the eve of the Iraq war on Three Counties Radio yesterday. They were talking about it because Kenneth Branagh re-enacts it in the drama Ten Days to War, broadcast this week.
(See Branagh's performance here)
It's a brilliant address. That it was delivered off the cuff, does not mean that he didn't do a lot of preparation. Maybe war focuses the mind beautifully. It was a Daily Mail reporter who immortalised it through her shorthand notes.
It's got short words and short sentences, lots of rhetorical threes and contrasts. I read that Collins was a big fan of Branagh's Henry V speech. There's definitely a bit of Shakespeare and the Bible in there.
I'm always on the lookout for humorous geniuses. Alexander Payne is one such man. I was rather underwhelmed by a film called Paris, Je t'aime- a collection of shorts by the top cinema auteurs of the moment. Until I watched his film, which rounds it all off.
They all had to pick an arrondissement in Paris and make a story out of it. Payne took the 14th and had a female American tourist describe her visit to Paris, using the device of her reading out an essay about the trip she had composed for her French class. It's a brilliant monologue - funny, sad and moving.
It reminded me of his other work, About Schmidt, (listen to Jack Nicholson as Schmidt look back on his life on You Tube - or better still watch the whole film). He also wrote Sideways, which is an understated romance, and Election, another sad but very funny film about politics.
What I like about Payne is his sublime sense of place. He captured Paris through the eyes of a postwoman from Denver. He often sets his films in Omaha, Nebraska. He takes very prosaic scenarios and makes them enchanting. He also evokes the pathos of being a loner with sensitivity and intelligence. Don't miss anything by Alexander Payne.