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Tony Blair's Address to Congress 2003

While in America, I had a discussion with Hal Gordon about how the British don't share the same taste for inspirational storytelling in speeches. He said Tony Blair had told some good stories in his address to Congress. I looked up the speech. There are some good anecdotes, the one about Keir Hardie, the reference to his son and the loss of America, the reference to how a European politician had suggested an increase in gasoline taxes.

It is vintage Tony Blair. I noticed the Number 10 transcript left out some of the colour. I wonder why.

Click here to read the speech.

I also found a good commentary on the speech. Click here.

P J O'Rourke on Adam Smith

I picked up P J O'Rourke's book on Adam Smith's The Wealth of Nations in New York. It's great fun. I found a few lines which would be good for a funeral service taken from Smith's other book, Moral Sentiments:

Walk forth without repining; without murmuring or complaining. Walk forth calm, contented, rejoicing, returning thanks to the Gods, who, from their infinite bounty, have opened the safe and quiet harbour of death, at all times ready to receive us from the stormy ocean of human life.

Washington Conference

Attending the Lawrence Ragan Communications Speechwriters Conference in the Mayflower Renaissance Hotel in Washington DC was an amazing experience for me. There were over 200 speechwriters there. The lectures were so detailed and analytical. It was a revelation.

Americans tend to be more responsive and articulate in seminars, and as speakers they are very polished. They speak the same language, but the culture and attitude to the world is very different.

I got an insight into American corporate culture from Linda Rutherford from Southwest Airlines. Because sales is fundamental to the Americans, they will go to great lengths to get their message out. Southwest Airlines has an internal speakers bureau, which arranges for company employees to go out and speak to schools and other organisations.

Hal Gordon, a former speechwriter for the President Reagan Administration and Colin Powell, gave a very inspiring talk about using stories in speeches. His tip was, save something good for the end. The end of your speech needs to get them applauding. He explained why Jesus used parables, and how we identify with different characters. One heckler suggested that Jesus used parables because he didn't have statistics. I found that amusing.

Bob Bostock, a speechwriter for former-New Jersey Governor Christie Whitman, talked about ghostwriting books and self-publishing. He had a refreshing no-nonsense approach to the hard work that goes into creating a book. After the lecture, we also shared notes on the decline of Conservatism in both our countries.

Drew Westen, Ph.D., gave an analysis of how to use emotions in speeches with reference to the forthcoming Presidential elections.

The Americans are very comfortable talking about feelings. Something the British avoid, especially when talking about politics. We were invited to investigate our feelings towards a party's principles, our feelings towards candidates, our feelings towards candidates' personal attributes, our feelings towards candidate's policies. Lastly we were asked to evaluate the facts about the candidate's policies.

Westen ended by quoting Ella Fitzgerald, "It don't mean a thing, if it ain't got that swing." You've got to connect with the feelings of the voters. Tony Blair was the master of that. New Labour understand the principles. They probably got it from the Clinton campaigns.

I enjoyed giving my presentation. I could give a few insights into the problems of being a freelance, which they appreciated and they laughed at my jokes. I was so grateful that they took the risk of asking me to speak. I've never been offered a gig of similar prestige in the UK.

Lawrence Ragan Communications would like to run speechwriting seminars in the UK, but I'm not convinced there would be a market for such events.

The British don't analyse things in the same way and they don't give the same emphasis to communication skills. The ritual of giving speeches is given great prominence in American society. My experience at university was that the standard of lecturing was appalling. In Anglican churches it is pretty dismal - and there is no pressure for clergy to improve. In business in the UK, it's regarded as showy and rather, well, American.

I enjoyed chatting to Hal Gordon, who seemed to have a very romantic view of the British political system. He writes a blog called The Speechwriter's Slant. I shall be a regular reader from now on.

Mark Ragan , the CEO of Lawrence Ragan Communcations, was a very charismatic host of the conference. He looks a bit like Michael Douglas. He shared his stories of his appeares as a speaker in the UK. In fact the thing about a speechwriting conference is that everyone tells stories, it seems the best speechwriters are compulsive anecdotalists!

Ragan run this conference every year in Washington. If you're at all interested in the art and practice of speechwriting I recommend going to this conference next year. Email David Murray for more information.

American Trip

I will be out of the office from Monday 11th February to Tuesday 19th February because I'm going to New York and Washington for a week. In Washington I will be addressing the Lawrence Ragan Communications Speechwriters Conference on the subject, "Stop educating, start entertaining: Use humor to make your messages stick." For the benefit of those who can't make it, I'm posting the text of my speech on this blog. It will also be useful for anyone at the conference who needs to pick up on the references.

Download ragan_humour_speech.pdf

More Charlie Munger

I've been working on a business speech today and reading more Charlie Munger speeches. I love this piece:

Another thing, of course, is that life will have terrible blows in it, horrible blows, unfair blows. And some people recover and others don’t. And there I think the attitude of Epectitus is the best. He said that every missed chance in life was an opportunity to behave well, every missed chance in life was an opportunity to learn something, and that your duty was not to be submerged in self-pity, but to utilize the terrible blow in constructive fashion. That is a very good idea. You may remember the epitaph which Epectitus left for himself: “Here lies Epectitus, a slave maimed in body, the ultimate in poverty, and the favored of the gods.”

Learning Your Script

Horace supposedly said this: Seek not for words, seek only fact and thought, and crowding in will come the words unsought.

I've got to do a 45 minute talk next week, and the way I see it, is I have written a 5,000 word script. Then I'm practising it about ten times. Then I turn the script into headings with specific examples. Then when I give the talk I use the headings. So the exact words I use will not be the same, but I've got a clear idea in my head what I'm going to say.

Charlie Munger

PcaThere are not many businessmen who give great speeches, but in the past year I've discovered Charlie Munger who can certainly lecture on the subject in a fascinating way.

Munger is Warren Buffet's sidekick at Berkshire Hathaway Corporation, the billion dollar investment fund. See his biography on Wikipedia.

Munger loves his books and he's published Poor Charlie's Almanack: The Wit and Wisdom of Charles T. Munger which is a collection of his speeches. observations and favourite books. Its inspiration is Poor Richard's Almanack which was written by Benjamin Franklin.

Franklin extolled the virtues of thrift, duty, hard work, and simplicity, Munger's updated version urges you to learn the lessons of psychology, science and risk.